tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6575904303318962215.post7872746272187692954..comments2018-08-13T18:05:01.441+05:30Comments on Confessions of A College Gal: Out for Lunch (XLVI)Unknownnoreply@blogger.comBlogger16125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6575904303318962215.post-30621851893632322442009-06-15T20:13:43.906+05:302009-06-15T20:13:43.906+05:30@Srivatsan
I m giving thought abt the conversatio...@Srivatsan<br /><br />I m giving thought abt the conversations. Anyway will check them again.Elviahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11214455153130713780noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6575904303318962215.post-73268303016034704002009-06-15T15:42:44.151+05:302009-06-15T15:42:44.151+05:30And you can use names or something related to gend...And you can use names or something related to gender in lines,while in conversation among two...cos in your previous posts,you tend to mix up first and second person dialogues and reader gets confused as who utters which line!<br /><br />continue writing!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6575904303318962215.post-85825141724541237572009-06-15T15:41:03.056+05:302009-06-15T15:41:03.056+05:30'Muttering its lines I Turned "of"(o...'Muttering its lines I Turned "of"(off) my laptop, walked to the door, no big confusion,'<br /><br />sorry if im irritating you ,to edit! :)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6575904303318962215.post-72715116880025605202009-05-13T20:55:00.000+05:302009-05-13T20:55:00.000+05:30@Ramji
Patience is a virtue :p@Ramji<br /><br />Patience is a virtue :pElviahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11214455153130713780noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6575904303318962215.post-45273962364941542842009-05-13T19:21:00.000+05:302009-05-13T19:21:00.000+05:30did shantanu propose u ???
plzz say yaar....
or m...did shantanu propose u ???<br />plzz say yaar....<br /><br />or my head will burst.....Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12892624988527033708noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6575904303318962215.post-39847398121256443192009-05-12T10:03:00.000+05:302009-05-12T10:03:00.000+05:30@ironmonkey
Lolz didn u see that I was funy.
Any...@ironmonkey<br /><br />Lolz didn u see that I was funy.<br /><br />Anyway it's bad to defame a traditional conservative good girl like this :pElviahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11214455153130713780noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6575904303318962215.post-41754397517257496052009-05-12T08:39:00.000+05:302009-05-12T08:39:00.000+05:30/me *coughs* (laughs) away to death
couldn't you .../me *coughs* (laughs) away to death<br /><br />couldn't you see i was kiddin?Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6575904303318962215.post-88090542272038965982009-05-11T17:17:00.000+05:302009-05-11T17:17:00.000+05:30@Ironmonkey
Narrow minded ppl, I tel y that's not...@Ironmonkey<br /><br />Narrow minded ppl, I tel y that's not a date. It's just a friendly meetElviahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11214455153130713780noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6575904303318962215.post-44746649453626474082009-05-11T16:53:00.000+05:302009-05-11T16:53:00.000+05:30It doesn't hurt to have multiple choices for a dat...It doesn't hurt to have multiple choices for a date, and parallel dating is good... lol !Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6575904303318962215.post-65186442179483908182009-05-11T14:12:00.000+05:302009-05-11T14:12:00.000+05:30@Eric
hey it's said going out for lunch in nothin...@Eric<br /><br />hey it's said going out for lunch in nothing specially romantic. It's just a friendly lunch.<br /><br />@Ironmonkey<br /><br />Why would Shantanu call me for McDonalds that to over phone when I am at the doors of Nandhini Palace.<br /><br />@artemis<br /><br />Thanks :-)Elviahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11214455153130713780noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6575904303318962215.post-34855631265363897712009-05-11T01:48:00.000+05:302009-05-11T01:48:00.000+05:30hey i've been followin ur work..i came to knw abt ...hey i've been followin ur work..i came to knw abt dis thru cr...gud job gal...and dis post in particular is good...Artemishttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12980921233434005774noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6575904303318962215.post-36027620551064953642009-05-11T00:55:00.000+05:302009-05-11T00:55:00.000+05:30wanton is an eatable, AFAIK!
not a bad post, but ...wanton is an eatable, AFAIK!<br /><br />not a bad post, but Iam guessing the lunch is with YOUR guy ;)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6575904303318962215.post-60165398887694342752009-05-10T23:23:00.000+05:302009-05-10T23:23:00.000+05:30mystery guy... till one point i was convinced it w...mystery guy... till one point i was convinced it was shantanu u were meeting for lunch.<br />and then came shantanu's call :)<br /><br />not bad.. a couple weeks and u ve met someone already.. way to go ;)Ericnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6575904303318962215.post-19210778456664682532009-05-10T20:46:00.000+05:302009-05-10T20:46:00.000+05:30Thats nice to have such a post narrative model. Bu...Thats nice to have such a post narrative model. But too much of try may make it messy. <br /><br />If that was an intentional try then its doing good for reading.<br /><br />I asked out of curiosity who the person is. <br /><br />But it would have been better if you have done the whole happening in a single episode. Atleast to the extent who is he and what made you to accept his his invitation to be on for the lunch that too with a perfect note to the make up.....<br /><br />English after some 4 episodes has gone bad again in this. More of spelling errors in this. <br /><br />Really thanks for asking me about my feedback.Nathannoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6575904303318962215.post-17830824803088961822009-05-10T20:20:00.000+05:302009-05-10T20:20:00.000+05:30@Nathan
Will Tel u all that in the next post, but...@Nathan<br /><br />Will Tel u all that in the next post, but all I want to know now is, is it so abrupt or is it fine?Elviahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11214455153130713780noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6575904303318962215.post-71262792637528460742009-05-10T20:15:00.000+05:302009-05-10T20:15:00.000+05:30Hey Elvia,
Out for lunch with whom. Who is the gu...Hey Elvia,<br /><br />Out for lunch with whom. Who is the guy who has invited you for lunch? Bit curious for you haven't revealed about that.<br /><br />And again an abrupt stop on Shantanu makes it more curious.Nathannoreply@blogger.com